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South Of Eden
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South Of Eden |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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Shallow breaths, above knees short, gasping pants at ankles, a downpour untied in a not, of whether as thrusts of aspiration slowly, carve criks in the creases between seam, and hollow, trickling to land’s promised, south, of Eden as the bud twitched, flourishing in its trembling emanate, of purge and revival. Each footprint I press into the labium, of amity is one more impression, I put into the membrane of remembrance. Each cunning dent I sign into the peephole of humanity is one more bowl I’ve molded, into the relevance, of existence Each V I’ve notched into the chink that arms her is one more tear I’ve widened to keep her, whole. Let’s share the lucidity of our squeam and percipience as I place my head between your wits and mesh my marbles with your own impulses and capacity, as you baby sit, on my beholding keeping a shadowed eye on my plunging of your assertiveness as you give, heed to my support, your heels balancing the thrusting of your thirst as I embrace you tight unflinchingly, and drill into your beast and marrow immortally, my manifest destiny, as you try and retain as much of my influence, as possible your clasping, cleaving on to my dispersion, as we mind each other’s p’s and cues as I, comply all over the fascia of your essence tasting the juices flowing, from the sustenance of our subliminal renderings As the wind bethinks the fatality, of our genesis. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
If I missed this then others have too so up you go! You never fail to amaze and your poetry never disappoints. Helen |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
You are a wonderful blender of the erotic and the romantic, each taking the reader to heights and depths that tantalize and teeter on the edge of surprise. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yep, just exactly what EmmaRose said. That one teetered my totter for sure |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Richy, there is a huge wave of energizing emotion in your write that invests me. That's a good state to be in, energized and inspired!  Love, Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You have a way of pushing the erotic envelope just far enough while creating a sensuous and seductive kind of romance. Always wanted to take a trip to Eden~ Thanks for the virtual tour!  |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
You have a wonderful way with words, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hey thanks a ton guys, you are always just so very, very kind. I appreciate it beyond words. |
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