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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Memories Cool mists lying low Gray mornings lay loving down Going home again In my salt-silt sandy mind Foggy dreams missing sea sounds ~*~ © krj 4-10-11 [inspired 4-8-11] |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
aaahh...thats how i felt reading this it was really soothing. lol Good job! Dreamgal |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
ah, now that's beautiful and soothing for this Sunday afternoon...very nicely done  There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am so keeping this one. I am! I love it and understand it. Thank you for writing this poem and sharing it with us, Karilea. It's a keeper. Love Alison |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
It's that sea sound that makes this one chime for me. Truth is, if you were to read each line, one at a time, without going on to the next one, they all five stand alone. That is some damn fine writing as far as I'm concerned. ~ Why do we drive on a parkway and park on a driveway? ~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a 'write' most pleasant indeed ! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How charming, dear Karilea! salt-silt sandy mind Love, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Mmmm! Lovely! Owl |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I'm there with you, Sissie! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is really pretty! The cherished memories as well as returning from whence we came. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As a child I lived by the seaside and there are times when I yearn to go back. At least I can readily do that with my "Memories"!  ~ Thank you, for yours!Love, Linda  |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
There is nothing that compares to the feeling that the sea induces in those that have lived by or just adore a beach. I can smell the sea, matter of fact, all my senses are quite sparked right now |
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