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Open Poetry #47

untarnished words

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2011-04-09 07:07 PM

      untarnished words

With so much life and love
  forever lost
and but this fleeting moment,
between past and future
  misty shores,
to bridge the space
between our hearts,
with what untarnished words
may I touch your lovely mind
  and soul
to take another chance on Love?

                --- b. e. adams (4/9/2011)

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2011-04-09 07:52 PM

Another stunning beauty from The Master, Bruce.
Ida

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2011-04-10 02:48 AM

I love hopeful poetry. You make me smile.

A

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2011-04-10 03:00 AM

isn't the dream the beginning, expectations are the way to realize something, I love the subtlety of the images and the correspondance between love and universe. quite delightful;

yann

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2011-04-10 07:24 PM

I know her answer would be yes.

Owl

naturegirl
Member

since 2009-09-30

Posts 168
England

5 posted 2011-04-15 05:43 PM

Lost in admiration with this one. You certainly are a dream poet.x

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

6 posted 2011-04-15 10:08 PM

a dreamscape beauty whose shadows cast are long on hopes and dreams...exquisite write...a very pleasurable read

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2011-04-16 11:45 PM

Enjoyed this, my friend...and it's always worth another chance.

j.

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

8 posted 2011-04-21 04:17 PM

love this! are there ever
enough "second chances"
when it comes to love?

It's psychosomatic. You need a lobotomy. I'll get a saw
~Calvin & Hobbes

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