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2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2011-04-09 05:34 AM

The rain falls alone,
But she is not all bitter
On flowers in fire.

La pluie tombe seule,
mais elle n'est pas amère
sur les fleurs en feu.

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2011-04-09 07:34 AM

I REALLY like this one!

fine 'write' !!

OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2011-04-09 08:04 AM

Yann, je l’aime tellement aussi. Je sens la fraicheur de la pluie et la chaleur des couleurs des fleurs. La morte est le début d’une nouvelle vie et ce n’est pas amère pour la personne morte, seulement pour ceux qui restent et qui ne comprennent pas bien le Paradis.

Owl

jwesley
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3 posted 2011-04-09 08:26 AM

I like this too. Well said my friend.

j.

2islander2
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by the sea

4 posted 2011-04-10 03:02 AM

thanks Bruce for the supportive and kind words.

yann

2islander2
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by the sea

5 posted 2011-04-10 03:05 AM

merci beaucoup diana (thanks a lot diana) your words go beyond my expectations (tes mots vont au dela de mes espérances) ...J'avais d'abord écrit (I wrote first) sur les fleurs en larmes (on flowers in tears) but I change for Fire more expressive and colored to my eyes (mais j'ai changé pour Feu plus expressif et coloré,

yann

2islander2
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by the sea

6 posted 2011-04-10 03:06 AM

thanks a lot jwesley.

yann

Margherita
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Eternity

7 posted 2011-04-10 09:11 AM

Absolutely stunning association of deep melancholy (rain) and the source of joy (flowers and fire/light). The result is peace.

Incredibly touching, dear Yann.

Love,
Margherita

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05

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Poe Haven, USA

8 posted 2011-04-10 02:28 PM

this is very beautiful and quite moving...just lovely, yann

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Alison

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9 posted 2011-04-10 03:22 PM

yann,

Incredible.

Alison

OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa

10 posted 2011-04-10 06:50 PM

J'aime aussi les fleurs en larmes, Yann, mais j'adore les fleurs en feu.

Owl

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