Open Poetry #47 |
In the dance.. |
dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
She dances like a beautiful swan. Delicate, & graceful in each purposeful step. Surrendering... At peace in "the dance" where darkness disappears. And graceful silohuettes, like birds of a feather, prance delicately in there movements. A world disappears if only for a moment... in the dance. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Very soft - this dance seems almost a whisper. A |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Thanks Allison, I appreciate it. Dreamgal |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"A world disappears if only for a moment." ...don't you just love those moments when you get them...nice write, portrayed excellently |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Thank you Steven, appreciate you stopping by. Dreamgal |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a soothing, surreal piece of writing, dear dreamer gal! Lovely! EA |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Thank you Earthangel, i appreciate that. Dreamgal *smiles* |
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