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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it was something about me sipping some jack and jill going up the hill or down behind then she came back with her buckets spilled and that goofy grin she gets after on occasion that she can't go home with for awhile oh, I didn't mind her economy of syllables or how her words ran together toward the end when she didn't really want to talk too much said her animal was not trained too well maybe not even house broken if I didn't mind but she had been saving space for everything I might want to offer her in lieu of love and she might have some extra room in there too in case I brought more than she was used to and then damn she said almost too carefully as she helped me move well beyond her limits ___________ daark (scribblenote: note to self..picking up women at the storage unit facility is rough on the back) [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (04-08-2011 12:43 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your scribble note wraps it so nice. But it's all that other stuff in between I'm trying to sort out, 'cause I never know what to do after reading you. Gawd you crack me up. *smooches* dude~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue..you could always offer to help me with the cramped spaces..might mess up your hair though..thanks babe |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dark...physics can be changed into a non-exact science, just like that. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hey, I'll get a storage unit if that what it takes to be picked up by an amazing poet writer guy, biker of darkness or something. I will. Honest. Ali-san |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
I'll have what Allison is having LOL. Enjoyed your write as usual its eccentric in a way and interesting always. Dreamgal |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..i much enjoyed your poem..>>spiros |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie....thank you lady friend _______________ ms ali-san, thanks babe...I will bring the snow mobile..ahh darn, it blew a seal. ___________________ ms dreamgal, thanks ms ____________________ friend spiros, thank you for the read |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such an intriguing title for another extraordinary work by our daark word wizard. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...you are such a sweet blessing to my penspatterings..thanks lady!! |
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