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Open Poetry #47
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sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
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0 posted 2011-04-07 01:00 PM


Searched for you, I did not
Finding you, I did not
Twas your soul, that laid the path
Which delivered me to you
Has given me life, which leaves me....
Breathless
© Copyright 2011 Richard Konkler - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2011-04-07 04:29 PM

Oh yes, the souls "secretly" prepare the path and it seems a wonder and in fact it is.

Just lovely.

Love,
Margherita
dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
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2 posted 2011-04-07 08:45 PM

Very pretty. Enjoyed

Dreamgal
EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
3 posted 2011-04-09 05:29 PM

The feeling of breathlessness envelops the poet. Well done
EmmaRose
faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
4 posted 2011-04-09 08:34 PM

beautiful and moving...enjoyed it much!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2011-04-10 09:38 PM

I'm a sucker for happy endings, and this made me feel very happy.
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