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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-04-07 11:58 AM

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In gray haze
Beyond the trees—
The lives I didn’t have

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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-04-07 04:36 PM

Love the scenery and the thoughts. Maybe we do live multiple/alternative lives, but we are not conscious of it on this level ...

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-04-07 06:41 PM

I sent a comment. It didn't show up, at least I don't see it.

~ If you don't want gays in the military, make the uniforms ugly. ~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2011-04-07 06:43 PM

Thought I replied to this earlier...not there though...hmmm - see jerry had the same problem.

I think this is one your best, my friend.

Much enjoyed the read.

j.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

4 posted 2011-04-07 06:46 PM

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Thanks all

Please also, hear the title
as well, as if before reading it . . .

Thanks again

John

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Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2011-04-07 08:03 PM

/i like this

regret/ remorse I think it means that a person is good

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2011-04-07 09:27 PM

And yes, my friend....

this is more than
what is first seen

deep is this well,
and thankful I am
that you wrote it.

It will definitely have
me thinking for days.

Well done, Sir.

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

7 posted 2011-04-07 10:33 PM

Do get the homonym (morning-mournng) if that is what you mean... Well, I am a societal loser almost by definition, and yet somehow mist beyond the trees is comforting, even exciting to me at times. (Perhaps the phrase is "emotionally invigorating" ?)

A fine poem, imho. The imagery and sentiment are keen indeed. Must say, though, that the more mystery and injustice experienced, the more I believe this world is some kind of mere audition for us.

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