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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-04-05 08:39 AM


lady moan of highway
how your curves are temptation
leaning around my eye corners

like pale flesh escaping
when seduction is low cut
and presenting refreshment

and those down hill easy sighs
that you offer my spoken brims
with no jurisdiction or time

just promises of endings
eventually abrupt but fulfilling
when the look back times come

and you still knead another rider


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darrk (highway series)

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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-04-05 08:46 AM


Now isn't this just awesome! Wish I could read this to my brother who is another passionate lover of highways, but how to render this masterpiece in German is beyond my ability I fear!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-04-05 08:55 AM


ms mar....I am sure he would understand the content..the language of the highway is universal.  Thanks lady friend
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3 posted 2011-04-05 10:20 AM


Hey!  Thanks for the ride.  It made me smile to meet your lady friend.

Ali-san

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2011-04-05 11:10 AM


I certainly see something different when I drive on a highway but, hey, I sure do like yours.  Enjoyed, Mr. Dark.

Helen

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2011-04-05 12:26 PM


ms ali-san, sure..now you thank me after you two took off together while I was in the library reciting obama speeches. humph!! grin

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ms helen , thanks lady friend...something about the scoot eye view makes any highway seem as bit more exciting.

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6 posted 2011-04-05 03:47 PM


I've been on the back side
of the front ride
to know that leaning into
this poem is pure joy...

Smiling at you, D.


Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2011-04-05 06:45 PM


ms sun, thank you lovely lady for the eyes
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8 posted 2011-04-05 09:45 PM


Into each eye the highway must yield its treasure, and so be it with this gem.

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Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2011-04-06 07:34 AM


thanks so much JP
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