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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-04-04 11:22 AM

You can see it in my eyes
Tell by the way I talk
And hear it in my sighs
Just watch the way I walk
It’s written all over me
I’m in love with my man
It’s clear to see
He does it like no one else can
He loves me like a house afire
I go up in a white hot flame
Of burning desire
Only he knows how to tame

LGR©4/4/11

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-04-04 11:50 AM

Uh, you've been going hot and pantingly heavy lately, Lori. Maybe you ought to come up for air. Okay. That's enough air. Resume.

~ If you don't want gays in the military, make the uniforms ugly. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-04-04 12:13 PM

Gasp! Okay Jerry? I guess my "can't wait to
get home from work to see him" is showing

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

3 posted 2011-04-04 06:14 PM

Cheez and rice, Yosef and Mary!

Dang Lori, I hope your boyfriend is a fireman...

Even my laptop is starting to smolder... !

Very sensual and enticing.

Wonderful write!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2011-04-04 06:22 PM

Richy, No boyfriend for me! I married him!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2011-04-04 11:03 PM

I am fanning myself and trying not to be jealous ---- what is that they say? Don't covet thy poet friend's husband? Something like that anyway.

Love this and love your relationship.

xoxoxo
A

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2011-04-05 03:29 AM

If that room's rockin don't bother knockin!!

Eric

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2011-04-05 04:06 AM

Love Eric's reply. Well, yes, you go, girl! Life is too short.

Helen

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

8 posted 2011-04-05 06:37 PM

wow...that's a hot love poem...enjoyed it much!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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