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dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
Posts 442


0 posted 2011-04-04 12:22 PM



Oh, here it comes that feeling,
that awful poor me feeling,
like everyone has it better,
than me.
Can anyone relate?
Oh so and so's life is great?
And im the only one in misery?
Like, so and so has this,
and so and so has that,
and on and on it goes, &
poor me woes like that.
It really makes me sad,
but mostly makes me mad,
cause I should be more
grateful for everything I
have.
If id just take stock i'd see,
that Im just as good, as she,
and I should see my glass,
as being half full.
Its no wonder I feel sad,
when i convince myself
im bad, its just lies that
no one said, but even still.
I think its human nature to
sometimes feel this way, and
this is why i write, to release
these thoughts away. For when
I put it out and see it on the
paper, then I see it clearer,
& my life always looks better.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2011-04-04 04:35 AM


Very good ponderings, dear dreamgal.

In this world, where so many still die of hunger, we really should never fall into that kind of envy, but it happens because we are surrounded by shameless materialism.

A good reminder to be grateful and to promote change in this world.

Love,
Margherita

dreamgal
Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442

2 posted 2011-04-04 07:24 AM


Thank you Margherita! You really put it in perspective once again. You are one smart gal!

Thanks,
Dreamgal
*smiles*

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2011-04-04 07:35 AM


Sometimes it hard to see the flowers for the bitter weed. Hang in there.

~ If you don't want gays in the military, make the uniforms ugly. ~

dreamgal
Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442

4 posted 2011-04-04 08:22 AM


Thanks Jerry, I know im just being a whiner.
lol
Have a grrrrrrrrrrrreat day!

Dreamgal

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