She's talking in her sleep

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Open Poetry #47

She's talking in her sleep

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2011-04-03 07:09 PM

She talked in her sleep
The words kept coming
Like the sweet Louisiana taste
Of the red October sun

She was wrestling in her sleep
Her stomach shook
Hours upon hours

She slept like the coconut islands
Where the palm trees seem
To sway with the wind
As if the fire was her guardian

Her body, her white blouse
Touching her skin until the slow breathes
Of my soul seemed to hold her body close

She was wrestling in her sleep
Like the diamonds of the coast
With her stomach shaking
My fingers on her neck
My hand resting around her small, delicate waist

I could touch so much of myself
It would spill over to her
Like the washing of ones hands
From right to left
The water running through the dames
Of my slow fingers
And I felt alive

Alive with her in my arms.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-04-04 04:37 AM

Dear Tomer, this is fantastic. My very favorite of yours. So delightfully creative.

Love,
Margherita

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

2 posted 2011-04-04 07:26 AM

Tomer,

I have to second what Margherita said, this is definetly up there on one of your best.
I enjoyed it, my first read of the day.
Thanks!

Dreamgal
*smiles*

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2011-04-04 11:52 AM

Thanks, Margherita. Happy to hear you enjoyed it so much...hope all is well

Cheers

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2011-04-04 11:52 AM

Thanks, Dream. Your kind words are always welcome. Happy you enjoyed

Cheers

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