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twistedpup
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since 2011-02-25
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0 posted 2011-04-03 06:59 PM



Time isn't always a friend.
Sometimes days go on forever and it feels
like there's no tomorrow.
The yesterdays gone past,
no regrets.
Just lessons learned.
Complicated situations, place blame with out reason.
Feelings are held in.
Fighting the words of a bleeding heart.
Trying not to fall to peices,
trying not to let it all out.
The phone is taunting,
wanting to call.
Knowing its not a good choice at all.
One bleeding heart,
one love in the dark.

*hugs*

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2011-04-05 03:33 AM


You're certainly sailing through many emotions in this piece.
I read them clearly.

Well done!

Eric

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