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Just between you and me
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Just between you and me |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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just between you and me I'm lonely because just you and me is just me staring at the wall with no one to call to keep me company with just my poetry of sad laments I must be content just between you and me I'm lonely LGR(C)4/3/11 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I was told once that I was lonely because all I had were my written words. Maybe so. ~ If you don't want gays in the military, make the uniforms ugly. ~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, Lori! What a story! Who would make you feel that way? I am calling it appaling And I don't know what to say! I am feeling This revealing Of your sadness on display Makes me feel Just like a heel I'll come back to you today!!! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Hey Jerry,yep been pretty well glued to my computer. ___________________________________________ 'Deer not to worry,my man will be home tomorrow!  thanks guys! Lori |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We'll talk, on Tuesday, of all that's gone awry, or better, depending.  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Man, I hope your guy has been eating his Wheaties... eeesh... I think he's gonna need em! Great stuff here dear friend, honest and embracing. Richard |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Richy if this one is steamy take a cold shower befor you read Ravish  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The nice part is that the loneliness won't go on forever. Nice mood setting Lori. Eric |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Too many thoughts rattling round In the quiet, not a sound~ May sweet plans ease your sorrow Bring on the homecoming of tomorrow!  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hey, I was heading over for coffee, but I don't want to inuterrupt now that you are no longer alone. Love this, girl friend. And that Balladeer? He wrote the same thing to me last week. A |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
i love the raw reality and your sincerity in this one...loneliness for that certain someone truly aches There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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