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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-04-03 11:30 AM




If you were here
I would ravish you
with endless skin
wet kisses
I'd take your breath away
with mine
into realms of rapture
Spilling sounds
of ecstasy
as we overflow
into each other




LGR(C)4/3/11

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-04-03 12:19 PM


Okay. Time to walk my mutt, Zoe around the block. Trying to calm down. Whew!

~ If you don't want gays in the military, make the uniforms ugly. ~

dreamgal
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2 posted 2011-04-03 01:07 PM


Whew is right!
Lori, as if my hot flashes weren't bad enough! Jeez!!!

Dreamgal
*smiles*

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2011-04-03 01:09 PM


Sorry 'bout that Jerry. Hope it isn't raining but the cold shower probably wouldn't have hurt you anyway...hehe



Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-04-03 01:14 PM


dreamgal I hope you have some lucky guy you can take it out on!

EmmaRose
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5 posted 2011-04-03 05:00 PM


The longing and desire is felt in this.
Sunshine
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6 posted 2011-04-04 07:31 PM


And now, he's there,
so I won't even bother to call
at all!


ethome
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7 posted 2011-04-04 08:03 PM


I understand these feelings and they make a great passionate poem.

Eric

steavenr
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8 posted 2011-04-04 10:46 PM


...you melted the qwert out of my keyboard with this one...talking sizzling... (blushing smiles)
Balladeer
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9 posted 2011-04-04 10:52 PM


All of that over a vegetable??? Oh...you said raVish!!
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