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dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
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0 posted 2011-04-02 07:17 PM



He had a certain something,
a certain fer' certain something.
He was,a rootin, tootin, kinda guy.
With a swager in his walk,
Anda certain kinda talk,
each girl would blush,
whenever he'd walk by.
Add a flirty lil wink,
and a sexy kinda grin,
and a way of charm that'd
set the room on fire.
He just hada kinda way,
that ed maka womans day,
he was a rootin,tootin,
kinda guy...

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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1 posted 2011-04-02 07:20 PM


Good one! I kinda gotta real good picture in my head 'bout what yer talkin' 'bout. Yee Haw!
Lori

dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
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2 posted 2011-04-02 08:00 PM


LOL Lori!! Too funny! I know I just had this image of a cowboy and went with it?
Thanks for commenting.


Dreamgal

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
3 posted 2011-04-03 12:13 PM


You make the words swagger, too!  I got a kick out of the dude ranch attitude. Sassy and fun to read.   ~ Karen
dreamgal
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4 posted 2011-04-03 01:01 AM


awww shucks thank ya klassy lassy! lol
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2011-04-03 03:58 AM


I wonder where ya can buy that??

I guess ya gotta be born with it....sigh...

This is real cute and an enjoyable read.

Eric

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
6 posted 2011-04-03 05:10 AM


Fun read, dreamgal!  
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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7 posted 2011-04-03 09:56 AM


Aw, shucks yourself, you 'lil filly.

~ If you don't want gays in the military, make the uniforms ugly. ~

dreamgal
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8 posted 2011-04-03 12:58 PM


Thanks Ya'll !!

Glad ya liken my poem!
Lol

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