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porky118 Junior Member
since 2011-03-31
Posts 15minnesota |
i get to the place where we always meet,i talk to you evan tho it could get me into some trouble,i tell you exactly how i feel, but yet it seems like you could care less, you tell me i have a good chance then away it slipps as a man comes in your all over him and make me a distant memory away with my hopes away with my dreams. your with another man is not hard to see but u break my heart like another crash in the sea i know you cant see what this has done to me thats why i write so u can feel action speak louder then words but baby im all still. i got nothing to say but please just understand its not easy to love love is just another war that cant be won you can fight it all you want but it always ends the same |
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porky118 Junior Member
since 2011-03-31
Posts 15minnesota |
its different then what im use to writting but please tell me what i can improve on |
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