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Open Poetry #47

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twistedpup
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since 2011-02-25

Posts 115

0 posted 2011-04-01 07:39 PM

another notch on your belt
another girl in your bed
just another friday night
back late, so i stay
breakfast in the moring
you bring me to get my car
then nothing for a week.

no text or call
no hey whats up
nothing at all

another notch on your belt
another girl in your bed
just another friday night
waking up next to you
felt so right

these are the things i didnt want to be

now you've got me spinning
twisted off my feet
of balance with everything
wondering
thinking
writing

*hugs*

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-04-01 09:18 PM

This is a difficult one to respond to,
but since you enjoy feedback, my first
response is: check your spelling.

Secondly, if this is from the hip?
Lose that person. Don't be a "next in line".
You're much too good a person for that
to happen to you.

'Nuff said.

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