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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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0 posted 2011-04-01 01:57 PM


the wind blew softly and I heard the answer ring
refrains
from an old song, sung
shouted in echoes of ecstasy
friends
of consciousness in streams of same
sanguine shadows of compromise
speaking volumes of volume-lessness
hushed tones
of soft-spoken weariness
well-worn
edginess, edges of worn-down
staring
into the face of symbiotic sanctity
shearing the sanguine readiness
of soft-drenched apparel
draped
along the lines of loquacious lingering
dreaming dreams of bygone remembering
dazing into days and days of soft-blown
breezes
blown into billows of idleness


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dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
Posts 442

1 posted 2011-04-01 02:11 PM


This was excellent. You have a beautiful,way of conveying your words. And thank you also for answering my poem, "my precious boy" I appreciate that.
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2011-04-01 03:53 PM


Excellent, Steaven.  Going back for another read.

Helen

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