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Word Weaver
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0 posted 2011-03-31 08:36 PM



“The Quiet Hours“

In the quiet hours before dawn
when the conscious is tamed
we relinquish ourselves
to the vulnerability of deepest slumber where
the subconscious on its throne reigns;
automatism at its highest power,
sometimes a mighty adversary
sometimes a comforting friend.
Suppressed memories resurface,
conflicts left unresolved battle,
unrequited dreams are fulfilled.
Fast playing minutes
governed by the quiet hours' playwright.
Sometimes hope is given,
or we're tortured with despair.
Scripts are played out by
familiar and unfamiliar faces
often masquerading as others.
There's terror to be lived out
or tranquility may wrap us in a lullaby.
Frustration, horror, hope, longings
all mixed together in settings
of our inner most truth,
a blazing Technicolor parade
of all we can't or won't acknowledge in wakefulness
subconsciously orchestrating our wakeful hours.


© Copyright 2011 Marcia Miller-Twiford - All Rights Reserved
steavenr
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1 posted 2011-04-01 10:22 AM


...this surely needs to go back up so everyone can take another look at this exquisite "blazing Technicolor parade" you have so masterfully scribed...bump
Word Weaver
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2 posted 2011-04-01 11:55 AM


I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and thank you for saying so.


Sunshine
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3 posted 2011-04-01 09:23 PM


I've been here. But, as an excuse, I have
help!

I have two "pups" as I refer to my nearly
three-yr-old Shih Tzus, and lovely and
endearing as they are, they are habitual
for the most part in waking Mom up for the
nocturnal walk around the back yard...

and from that 1 or 2 a.m. waking, I'm pretty
much done with this poem, until I fall back
into that 3 or 4 a.m. slumber when the dreams
and mists hit with such reality that it's
as if I didn't get any more sleep at all!

Yep...this one has my name on it...and I
wasn't named Sunshine for nuttin'!



Good stuff, Marcia!


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4 posted 2011-04-01 09:51 PM


I have never seen it described better. We all have those "quiet hours", where the gates of the subconcious swing open wide and the ghosts of the past take center stage once again, as we lay, helpless to stop them, a captive audience to their whims.

I enjoy those hours.....and I enjoy your portrayal of them.

Spiros Zafiris
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5 posted 2011-04-01 10:58 PM


yes, i enjoyed your poem..>spiros
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6 posted 2011-04-02 12:20 PM


I so enjoy your poetry, Word Weaver. This one is exceptional.
                            Ida

Word Weaver
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7 posted 2011-04-02 08:27 AM


Thank you Ida. You might enjoy my website. Please pay us a visit.

Happy Days,
Marcia


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