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Word Weaver
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0 posted 2011-03-31 08:25 PM



“Pilgrims All“

We travel through life as seekers of the illusive
looking in distant places through windows of others
with unrealistic imaginings we wander
taking unfamiliar pathways towards the unknown.

Adventurous spirits howling at the wind
risking all for the ultimate and it eludes
as we leave rumpled sheets and empty glasses
our own inadequacies and longings are our guides.

Onward we continue our destination unclear
shattered hearts and foggy windows we leave behind
and without a backward glance or thought
we venture on looking for the next mystery
endeavoring to be the puzzle solvers of life.

Then comes a day with bright dawning
the road before us is straight with insight defined
always there but never traveled till that moment in time
it is then that we solve life's mystery.

Not a puzzle, not a dream, but our reality
the truth we have been searching for:
our own completeness, not to be found in another
but all through our journey patiently waiting
safely sequestered within ourselves.


© Copyright 2011 Marcia Miller-Twiford - All Rights Reserved
OwlSA
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1 posted 2011-04-01 12:22 PM


Absolutely lovely and so true, Marcia.  I especially love and agree with the last stanza.

Owl

Word Weaver
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2 posted 2011-04-01 12:27 PM


Thank you. I appreciate your reading and your comment.


JerryPat2
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3 posted 2011-04-01 12:41 PM


So very true is this well-written, well-thought-out poem, Marcia. Seems we spend most of our lives attacking life and looking for answers. Then suddenly, with a little age most of the answers to our questions reveal themselves, not to great fanfare, but simply merge within us.

~ OK, so what's the speed of dark? ~

Word Weaver
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4 posted 2011-04-01 12:51 PM


Thank you Jerry. I've learned that the answer is there is no answer. Life just is.


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