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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2011-03-31 06:28 PM

BETWEEN
31 March 2011

Tangled colours painting greenscapes
in brown and gold and rainbow whispers
when you pretend not to look
through the curtained window
of my yester-tomorrows
laughing softly at the banter.

Owl

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-03-31 06:40 PM

Sometimes your poetry just knock me out, Owl, (and that is a good thing), this happens to be one of those times.

"when you pretend not to look
through the curtained window
of my yester-tomorrows"

Very creative and expressionistic.

~ OK, so what's the speed of dark? ~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2011-03-31 07:14 PM

Thank you, Jerry, for your lovely compliment. Hopefully my poem only knocked you out metaphorically! I wouldn't like to be responsible for assault on you - or anyone for that matter! Smiles.

Owl

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

3 posted 2011-03-31 08:30 PM

Nice one!
Kat >^..^<

Word Weaver
Member

since 2011-03-06

Posts 437
California, USA

4 posted 2011-03-31 08:52 PM

I love your way with words. This is great!

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2011-04-01 10:18 AM

...definitely a lovely use of words in this one...a tribute to your abilities AND a pleasure to read...

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2011-04-01 10:20 AM

LOve this my friend...

j.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

7 posted 2011-04-01 12:37 PM

Thank you, Kat.

Thank you, Marcia.  The feeling is mutual.

Thank you so much, Steaven.  Smiles.

Thank you very much, Jimmy.  I am glad you do.

Owl

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

8 posted 2011-04-01 08:57 PM

Amazing, Diana!
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2011-04-02 09:49 AM

Truly delightful, dear Diana!

Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

10 posted 2011-04-03 10:51 AM

Thank you, Ida and Margherita. Smiles.

Owl

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