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dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
Posts 442


0 posted 2011-03-31 03:19 PM



I remember the moment,
I first held you,
Looking in your eyes
I fell in love w/you.


Those squinty little
eyes, that couldnt  
open wide, for the
white light was too
bright to see.


All ten toes,
cute as can be,
ten little fingers
so precious to me.


As I held you close,
your tiny hand
in mine, I never
felt such happiness,
ever in my life.


And ever since that
day, you've given
me such joy, I thank
god every day for....
My precious little boy.


Love, Mommie

© Copyright 2011 dreamgal - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-03-31 03:33 PM


Wonderful. Special. Wonderfully special. 'Nuff said.

~ OK, so what's the speed of dark? ~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2011-03-31 04:54 PM


Lovely, Dreamgal.  Don't change that ever.

Owl

dreamgal
Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442

3 posted 2011-03-31 06:26 PM


Thanks Jerry and Owl, Im gonna frame this one, so when he's a teenager, I'll remember how it was. *sigh* Lol
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2011-03-31 06:31 PM


That is a lovely idea, Dreamgal.  When my son turned 21, I gave him my version of Rudyard Kipling's If, but "Because" instead of "If."

Owl

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
5 posted 2011-03-31 08:35 PM


Wonderful poem for your little boy. I hope you save it for him to see when he's all grown up. enjoyed.
Kat >^..^<

dreamgal
Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442

6 posted 2011-03-31 09:05 PM


Thanks Kat, as always your so kind.

Dreamgal

steavenr
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Posts 4058

7 posted 2011-04-01 12:56 PM


sweet, touching and sweet...nicely done
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