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twistedpup
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since 2011-02-25
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0 posted 2011-03-30 09:56 PM



You are from my past,
now you have come back.
We traded contact information,
planning to talk again.
We did in fact.
You went to a bachelorette party
at the club with me.
We danced, you had a few,
i drove you home.
I spent the night with you,
this i liked...a lot.
Now i miss your body
next to mine.
Some night again,
sometime.
Until then i just want to say,
i hope you've come back to stay.

*hugs*

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2011-03-31 03:06 AM


Nicely done twisted.
Sometimes it just doesn't all come together the way we'd like it to.
I really like the yearning mood.

Eric

twistedpup
Member
since 2011-02-25
Posts 115

2 posted 2011-03-31 01:45 PM


thank you, its one of my more personal poems ya know, also your writing is amazing eric. wow.

*hugs*

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