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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-03-30 12:10 PM

perhaps it was just the dipping of your fingers
into that sweet solution you said was bad for you
but you just had to anyway, and more often
when you knew how I enjoyed tasting your digits
almost as much as you did giving them to me

or when you pretended the mirror was a window
that you would stand behind with your improper on
along with that smile you get excited with
when you hear certain songs playing within
and have to let your woman move around them

or the scent of your shoulders when pale and bare
and your hair slipping down over them slowly
like your gown had done only moments before
while you waited for my eyes to untangle you
and only leave room for my lips to know you better

or perhaps it was just the color of the day
when my eyes were no longer closed to imagine
I was your favorite little girl climbing tree
that only needed your bare feet ascending
to realized how thirsty I was and how hungry

when you had hidden heaven within your moan songs

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daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (03-30-2011 12:45 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-03-30 01:58 PM

Okay, so now the fog has dissipated from
the heat...

whew.

Good stuff!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-03-30 03:55 PM

ms sun...based upon a yogurt commercial I recently observed where the actress is getting every last drop of the item in question..more or less..thanks babe!!

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2011-03-30 11:38 PM

Sensual writing, Mr. Dark! Enjoyed!

Helen

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2011-03-31 02:54 AM

Aw DS did you have to explain it?
I was on a real trip through the sensuous forest of imagination.

Tell me honestly, how'd you use the yogurt?

I had a great time reading this, it's excellent!!

Eric

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2011-03-31 03:19 AM

It's too hot to sleep. Someone turn on the fan, please.

Ali-san

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2011-03-31 07:25 AM

honeybunch, thanks lady friend

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ET...no, I didn't use the yogurt...it was a TV add I saw that inspired the poem...true story (number 468) Thanks guy

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awwww ali-san, perhaps some ice cubes and a box of tickles will cool you down? thanks little one

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2011-03-31 10:34 AM

Nope, didn't work. Tried them.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2011-03-31 11:52 AM

You are a lustful poet, DS. VERY much so in everything you do.

~ OK, so what's the speed of dark? ~

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

9 posted 2011-03-31 09:07 PM

"while you waited for my eyes to untangle you
and only leave room for my lips to know you better"

...perfection

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2011-04-01 05:30 AM

thanks jp...I will take that as a good thing..

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steavenr, thanks to you amigo

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