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faithmairee
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0 posted 2011-03-29 06:46 PM



what (is it) makes the sun warmer
what (is it) makes the grass greener
what (is it) makes the stars shine
so much brighter at night (when
holding hands with another)

why is it we are in love when
we think we are in love and
everything is better and brighter
when seen through the eyes of love
i guess that's how love's meant to be  

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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ken206573
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1 posted 2011-03-29 07:20 PM


Love does make things better with another. I enjoyed your poetry.
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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2 posted 2011-03-29 08:05 PM


There is sa song that addresses just this situation, it is called, "Rose-Colored Glasses," by John Conlee.

~ OK, so what's the speed of dark? ~

faithmairee
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3 posted 2011-03-30 11:39 AM


Thank you both for your wonderful comments.  I appreciate them very much.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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