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Dead End Chase
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since 2009-01-22
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0 posted 2011-03-29 04:04 PM


The earth approaches rapidly
The crash has spared us all
A world full of mystery
And then we hear the call
What is that sound?
What could it mean?
Faith or science?
Life between?
The answers are not easily seen.

Was it a dream? Is it a dream?

Underground we travel now
Numbers guide us on
Prisoners, survivors
The others are now gone
Is there rescue? Is there not?
Time will shift and tell
Faith or science?
Say farewell
The answers will not choose to dwell

But in that moment that we fell,
I knew
It wasn't a dream.  
A dream come true.
But destiny found me through you.
Yes, destiny found me - through you.


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dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
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1 posted 2011-03-29 07:39 PM


Very intense, you really have a great way of telling a story, thanks
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