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martiniat8
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0 posted 2011-03-29 03:30 PM


In the dark of night we do not know what goes on
behind those windows
in the souls, hearts and minds
of those we care about

we do not know their true nature
their true intent
all of what is hidden
may be revealed in time

true feelings, true intent
are they just games people play
is there something else,
a message to be relayed

only time can say

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1 posted 2011-03-29 11:30 PM


Very intresting.  Even when we can see in the windows, we don't really know what is going on.  

Alison

2islander2
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2 posted 2011-03-31 07:26 AM


hello martiniat, I share a lot about this poem, uncertainty about messages otherpeople send everywhere, everyday, I can't be naive too, thanks for the clever and enjoyable write.

yann

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