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dreamgal
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0 posted 2011-03-29 01:24 AM



Why do I see you,
If your not there?
Why do I speak to you
when you don't speak? Why do I reach for you,
when your so out of reach?
Are you even real?
Made of flesh and bone?
with a heart and soul, or am I alone?
Should I stop pretending,
like some fairy tale?
Separate what is, and isnt real.
Another million dollar question...
Part 2: The answer.......

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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-03-29 11:40 AM


You may call it "Imagination" ... We usually insist in reaching for that which is out of reach, it's a challenge!

This is well expressed, dear dreamgal.

And the answers will come, I guess.

Love,
Margherita  

dreamgal
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2 posted 2011-03-29 04:10 PM


Thank you so much Margherita for your reply I appreciate it.
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3 posted 2011-03-29 11:18 PM


Perhaps it is human nature.  Or maybe you are an artist who is sensitive to these things.  Can't wait to find out.  I am enjoying your writing.

Alison

Klassy Lassy
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4 posted 2011-03-29 11:33 PM


Even in your modern expression, there are shades of Shakespeare in your questions.  I think of the quote, "We see what we believe as surely as we believe what we see."  However, when it comes to someone standing in one's path, wishes without adequate substance of coming to fruition can sure raise some insecurities.     Thought provoking, for sure!
dreamgal
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5 posted 2011-03-30 12:03 PM


Thank you Klassy Lassy, I appreciate your comments!
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