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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2011-03-25 05:00 PM


* * *

In answer to the question
that you never deigned to take to task:
I do not think you ask too much
I don't believe you ever asked;
you stood there like an orphanage
illuminated by the tact
of coppering gone verdigris
and twinings of the walk-me plant
nestling the shift of slate
in burial of fact--
purslane blooming in the sun
as mold depressed the colonnade
velveteen in fingerings
of every stop someone had past

leaning on the post-

a child in noisy crinoline

and wrinkles in her leggings,

(grin)

she's offering the lemonade

for six cents a cup and that

was strained to order

"hold the pulp"

in answer to the question that

you never thought to ask.


* * *



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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-03-25 05:25 PM


Had to look up "verdigris," but the rest of this was an easy, delightful, if catty read. "A Garden District Oracle" gives the answers to unasked questions, and for some strange reason I began to think of the philosophical bent of Walker Percy, one of my favorite Louisiana novelists, of which there are many of course.

Don't know why Percy cane to mind, except that he was so high minded, but could still get down in the dirt and mud with you. These lines just blew me away, "as mold depressed the colonnade / velveteen in fingerings / of every stop someone had past"

That, then, just about says it all, doesn't it?

~ Look hard behind you and you'll be able to maneuver around the pitfalls ahead of you. ~

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2011-03-25 05:32 PM


I'm glad you like it, Jer. It's a slightly re-worked repost, and somehow I feel like it's still evolving. And I did post it for you, knowing that you would just know.

Inspiration: The Roman Candy vendors (which are conspicuously absent)

When I get my land legs back, I think I'll take a bus to take the streetcar to see what I can't see.

Thanks for reading.

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2011-03-26 01:13 PM


I love of edginess of your poetry.

Always a nice read, serenity~

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2011-04-02 12:29 PM


Had to look up verdigris too but that would never stop me from delighting in your poetry, Karen.
                          Ida

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2011-04-02 07:59 PM


Thanks so much Ida, and Blues Serenade.

I once made a list of words I hate, but verdigris is a word I love. *smile*

I kinda grew up with it, since metal turns so quickly in high humidity. Swamp.

My love and gratitude to you all, and truly, The Garden District of New Orleans is...well, it IS.

If you love architecture and old oak trees, it's a must-see stop in New Orleans.

steavenr
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6 posted 2011-04-02 08:01 PM


I got the verdigris (from my days in the furniture business I suppose) but pray tell, what is a walk-me plant? Interesting write...loved it
serenity blaze
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7 posted 2011-04-02 08:07 PM


Ohhhhhh....those are just great--purslane, for the most part. It's a lovely but tough plant that can tolerate the pressure of people and other heavy beings walking on them.

I once saw an entire yard of the stuff--on tv though. My father once sank sacks of concrete with spaces between and planted purslane (or parslane?) in between the sacks that eventually turned to a rough hewn looking stone. Funny you should bring this up, because I was just thinking it would make a lovely border for a vegetable garden.

(I tend to like more naturalistic looking gardens.)

Thank you, stevenr.

EmmaRose
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8 posted 2011-04-03 05:25 PM


Although I cannot quite put my nose upon its
essence, the nostalgic feel to this historical narration rings true of what made a deep impression upon the
world of a young girl growing up in your neck of the woods.
This is my impression, right or wrong
I enjoyed its breath of originality.

easy1
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Southeastern USA
9 posted 2011-04-05 11:51 PM


I perceive the voice
of experience in this.
Ah, those shifting slates.

jwesley
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Spring, Texas
10 posted 2011-04-06 09:41 AM


Many memories this evokes, my friend, and loved the use of verdigris ( a fancy word for rust), which you seldom see used anymore. I miss the old city of 50 or so years ago, not the one of today.

Reminiscence speaking.


j.

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11 posted 2011-04-18 09:50 PM


I don't think there will ever be a moment where you don't floor me.. ever.
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