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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA 
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it would take a picture to make the pieces of your face fall into place ah, but i know your body i've outlined it in my mind a million times sometimes, at night i hold my pillow next to me and pretend we never drifted apart in search of better things There must be a poem in here somewhere. [This message has been edited by faithmairee (03-24-2011 11:21 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh, that old pillow trick, Faith, has been squeezed and wept on and thrown across the room by millions of forlorn lovers. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nice! Been there. Kat >^..^< |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
yes, indeedy, JerryPat...where would we be without our pillows...lol Kat...thanks for being here...i appreciate your comments so much There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Faith I love your last two lines, they say so much...Actually the first couple of lines are really good too...the whole darn thing is great!  Lori |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thanks, Lori. I appreciate that so much. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
there is a comfort to this melancholy that can only be best described as you have written...that pillow (as Jerry has identified it.) ...relating smiles of understanding to you |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..yes, a poem to relate to; indeed; from the heart..>>spiros |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
excellent Faithmairee, I wish my pillow could speak too, thanks for sharing an audacious and beautiful poem. yann |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is so touching, faithmairee. I think it is my favorite poem of yours. I am keeping it. Alison |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
steavenr-Thanks so much for reading and for your lovely comments. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Spiros-Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting on my poem. I appeciate your wonderful remarks. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
yann-you do me honor with your wonderful comments...thank you so much, yann Alison-I'm so honored, Alison. Thank you for making my heart smile! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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