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Open Poetry #47

Blooms Yellow -Haiku

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-03-24 04:50 PM

pale pink popcorn topped trees
green leaves unfurled
dandelion blooms yellow

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2011-03-24 04:53 PM

What a lovely splurge of natural colours! SEE what the bike ride did!

Owl

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-03-24 05:04 PM

I'm here to tell ya! No doubt. Maybe its not the bike at all... it is the mega dose of fresh air and sunshine and hugging my man

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2011-03-24 05:12 PM

Well, if that ain't a recipe for happiness, I don't know what is!

Owl

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-03-24 05:22 PM

Prefer the 5-7-5 syllable count, but since you straddle a hog recently I'll say no more. Except I like the picture you have just painted.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2011-03-24 09:38 PM

I am gonna go with the dandelions. I think they just pushed you right into spring and made you feel all better.

I love this.

A

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2011-03-25 04:42 AM

Oh, how lovely, dear Lori!

Just watered my multi-colored primula on the balcony ... and there IS a special tune and scent in the air ...

You captured it beautifully.

Love,
Margherita

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