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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-03-24 12:25 PM


Spring cleaning
neglected corners and webs
appalled at the accumulation
of clutter and dread
taking a ride
to clear my head

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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA
1 posted 2011-03-24 12:35 PM


Ha!  I know how this feels. Made for a neat poem.  I enjoyed it.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-03-24 01:27 PM


Yep, sometimes in the far reaches of our minds dust and cobwebs will accrue, Lori.

~ Look hard behind you and you'll be able to maneuver around the pitfalls ahead of you. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2011-03-24 01:50 PM


Faith & Jerry, Thanks for hanging around while I blow the cobs out!  
katahdin
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4 posted 2011-03-24 07:50 PM


Cute poem, enjoyed the rhymes.
Kat >^..^<

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5 posted 2011-03-25 12:26 PM


I wanna go.  I shake my head and things rattle among the dust bunnies!!!
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