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easy1
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0 posted 2011-03-23 03:32 AM




Winter is rockets,
Spring an aeroplane humming.
Sunny airplane hum!

Having seen such frost
the blossoms come more sweetly.
A new visitor!

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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-03-23 09:26 AM


It is indeed amazing to witness the rebirth of nature and to welcome the new visitors. Love your idea of attributing specific sounds to the seasons. A biplane in the air means summer to me too ...

Very lovely.

Love,
Margherita

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2 posted 2011-03-26 11:45 PM


Nicely said - great analogies.

Alison

2islander2
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3 posted 2011-03-27 03:58 AM


lovely images, great inspiration, thanks easy 1 for the enjoyable write.

yann

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