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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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Michigan

0 posted 2011-03-22 05:11 PM



His coat rode the war
As the tribesman began
To lose each other
To the pellets of guns

He rode the wind
With a simple walk
Like the gentle sway
Of the palm trees with the wind.

He had lost many men
Many brothers and friends
That transcended the night
And moved the words from the sun
Into the windows of their heart

He wore his coat
With such pride
Each sleeve in colors of gold

He was the merchant of the sky
The one who rode through the war unscathed
With the message of
ÒToday is foreverÓ
Written across his heart.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2011-03-22 07:58 PM


quote:
That transcended the night
And moved the words from the sun
Into the windows of their heart



Beautifully expressed, dear Tomer.

Love,
Margherita

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
2 posted 2011-03-23 02:43 PM


Margherita, happy you enjoyed.  Hope all is well

Cheers

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