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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2011-03-21 03:45 PM



I felt the wings of the apartments
Along the winding road of Vienna

Her hair was dazzling the wind
With her fingers
Rubbing against the side of her passenger door.

The roads curved in and out
Like they were dictating stories to one another

With the shores breathing life into the land
I went around the curves so swiftly,
I could touch her hand and the wheel at the same time
Bristling my thoughts against the beat of the music.

The soul of Vienna
On the hinges of our lips
Our feet, our beautiful red cheeks
Oh, this beauty
This feeling of such ambiguity
Amongst the streets of Vienna.  

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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2011-03-21 04:15 PM


Tomer, this is, as always, beautiful and unique - and poetry of the highest calibre.  I went to Vienna once – a few minutes ago . . . and I am still there . . .

Owl

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
2 posted 2011-03-22 04:52 PM


Owl, thanks for the kind words...

It's amazing how the beauty of a place, city, country can stay with someone for the rest of their lives.

Tomer

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