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Word Weaver
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since 2011-03-06
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California, USA

0 posted 2011-03-21 02:51 PM



"Cardboard and Whispers"

The street is quiet, solemn, cold before dawn,
pangs of hunger sound the alarm as
hands that used to finger coins in pockets
are rubbed together for warmth,
before a rising, pale yellow sun,
that scratches the thin sky like sandpaper.

Tattered attire adorning weary
forms that once blended in with others through
days of diligent labor, now rush to
scavenge through the park’s refuse cans.

The door of the corner gas station is missing
as they wash at a filth coated sink
in barely running rust stained water
soap a thing of the past
memories of cleansing morning rituals
disappearing challenged by day to day survival.

Outside the sidewalk is cracked,
scarred, as calloused as their faith.
There’s cardboard and wooden crates
in the alley, tonight’s suburbia for the
first come, first served.

Pushing supermarket carts of hope, they
search for coveted recyclables,
bounty from tipped over,
dented trash cans, amid moans of the
young and the old, no discrimination
on the streets of broken dreams.

They’re the disowned, forgotten, the helpless,
the leftovers of society, someone’s mother
or the not quite yet man, the discards of
uncaring relations with bibles on their
food laden tables of indulgence.

They walk as the deaf, the blind, unheard, unseen.
They are our brothers, sisters, they are withering,
they are dying . . . can we not hear them?
See their eyes open in quiet screams?
They are those who scrounge for the
discards of our pampered lives.
the aborted by-products of down sizing,

Those whom we scorn and scurry by,
for our hearts fear and whisper,
“There but for the grace of God go I.”

© Marcia Miller-Twiford


© Copyright 2011 Marcia Miller-Twiford - All Rights Reserved
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2011-03-21 03:55 PM


This is a sensitive and compassionate look at those who have fallen on hard times.  Whether they themselves or society has caused this, the fact is they are a reality and whatever the cause, it is very sad that this is the case.  It is very easy to be compassionate on reading this in a poetry forum, but it takes a golden soul to do so, in the world out there.  My personal and humble opinion is – with “give a man a fish and you feed him for a day, teach him how to fish and you feed him for a lifetime” in mind, that we and/or society need to find a way to help them help themselves.  

I think that we would be surprised if we knew the stories of each one.  We are inclined to make certain presumptions – or at least I was – until I found amongst unsalaried car guards at a local supermarket, somebody who was highly intelligent and learned very quickly and easily and whom I had taught French to when he was a university student and who went on to getting an Honours degree in History.

The following lines cut to the bone:

they are withering,
they are dying . . . can we not hear them?
See their eyes open in quiet screams

Thank you for turning our glance to this corner of humanity, Marcia.

Owl

Word Weaver
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since 2011-03-06
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2 posted 2011-03-21 07:40 PM


Thank you for reading and caring. I don't see any solution except to help if, when, and where we can.
Marcia


kindredspirit
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since 2009-05-19
Posts 156

3 posted 2011-03-24 06:23 PM


and to reach out where it is least expected...
katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
4 posted 2011-03-24 07:32 PM


I agree with Owl, not much more to say!
enjoyed your poem.
Kat >^..^<

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
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5 posted 2011-03-25 11:16 AM


I don't think a photograph could have captured a clearer picture than the one you painted with your words. Excellent
Lori

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

6 posted 2011-03-25 03:38 PM


this is an amazingly emotive write...I would have had to copy the whole write to tell you which part I liked best, but I will say that "memories of cleansing morning rituals
disappearing challenged by day to day survival" is the line that reached out and commanded that I pay closer attention.  I not only need to back and re-read, but want to do so.  Excellent work.  You've given a fine tribute to those of our society we probably ignore most often.  

Word Weaver
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since 2011-03-06
Posts 437
California, USA
7 posted 2011-03-25 03:47 PM


Thank you seems inadequate but please know that I say it with utmost sincerity.
Marcia

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
8 posted 2011-03-26 12:44 PM


Captures the sad reality of our sad world in a profound and caring way. Very thought provoking.
                           Ida

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