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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-03-21 12:42 PM



a love like ours
can not compare
with any love
i have ever dared
to even dream
that could be shared

between two lovers
so entranced
we compliment
and are enhanced
i dare not say it
was by chance

we bonded from
the very start
to you i gave
all of my heart
i was as enchanted
by your sweet remarks

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

© Copyright 2011 Faith Elizabeth Brigham - All Rights Reserved
katahdin
Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2011-03-21 12:46 PM


Lovely poem, loved the rhymes!
Kat =^..^=

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-03-21 01:09 PM



Liked the positive attitude here and the fact that love can, and does, compliment one another quickly and forever.

~ Look hard behind you and you'll be able to maneuver around the pitfalls ahead of you. ~

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2011-03-22 08:25 PM


The heart speaks and there is magic.

Love,
Margherita

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
4 posted 2011-03-24 12:34 PM


Thank you all for your wonderful remarks.  They are much appreciated.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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