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Anoo
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since 2011-01-23
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0 posted 2011-03-21 10:59 AM




In a fleeting moment of intimacy our eyes met each other
Our gazes infused; the world around us faded to a faint backdrop
as I succumbed to your lingering look.
A wave of radiance carried me away to a crystal maze
loosing myself amongst the crystal walls of your gaze
where passions gleam, I did not mind not knowing a way out.
I saw myself in your eyes;
bewildered and insanely falling into the spell of your enchanted gaze.
I’d travel to the past for miles in time
If only I can get lost in your eyes once again.



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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-03-21 11:03 AM


That's the best kind of "getting lost" indeed!

Lovely!

Love,
Margherita

dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
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2 posted 2011-03-21 03:35 PM


So beautifully written ahh the magic of it all. Well done!
steavenr
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3 posted 2011-03-23 12:45 PM


"I did not mind not knowing a way out" ...a sure sign of something special...nice write
katahdin
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4 posted 2011-03-24 01:34 AM


Nicely done, enjoyed so...bump!
Kat >^..^<

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