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Open Poetry #47

Piano

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

0 posted 2011-03-20 11:19 PM

Each evening begins
her love affair

A single candle
is lit and placed
on the mantle

She releases the tight bun'
from her hair as long soft waves of
auburn hair cascade down the small of her back.
Her white nightgown
loosely draped on her small frame.
a soft breeze blows gently
thru her window
Alone she finds solace
in her piano
an extension of herself
emotions flow out thru her long delicate fingertips that carefully stroke each key.
love, rage, envy,
all bound together like a lover.
tirelessly played til the flame
from the candle burns out

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-03-21 10:47 AM

Wonderful. Nothing like piano music to soothe the heart.

Love,
Margherita

Anoo
Member

since 2011-01-23

Posts 55
UK

2 posted 2011-03-21 11:04 AM

Very beautifully presented like a story unfolding gracefully.
Well Done!

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2011-03-21 02:21 PM

you've described the passion of playing so very well...great write

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

4 posted 2011-03-21 04:53 PM

Thank you all for your comments I really appreciate them.

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