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dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
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0 posted 2011-03-20 05:28 PM



This man was a gift,
my first impression
of how a man should be
Strong and protective
wise and loving
this was my father to me...
Fun adventures,  
special times
cotton candy&
carnival rides


Walks thru the woods
your hand in mine
This was my father to me....


And Til one day we meet again
these memories i'll keep.
And you'll be there with cotton candy
waiting just for me...

"I LOVE YOU DAD"



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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-03-20 06:33 PM


Wish I had someone with those kind of memories about me. Not crying. Had my chance. Flubbed it. Very nice poem, dreamgal.

~ Look hard behind you and you'll be able to maneuver around the pitfalls ahead of you. ~

dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
Posts 442

2 posted 2011-03-20 07:24 PM


Thankyou for your response yes I miss him alot but he's in my heart always.
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2011-03-20 07:49 PM


What a sweet and loving tribute to your Dad.  
Like you, I'm certain we'll meet again someday, because my heart tells me so.

Welcome to the blue sea, dreamgal~

dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
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4 posted 2011-03-20 11:24 PM


Thank you all for your responses .
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