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Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

0 posted 2011-03-18 05:58 PM

The air
was
sweaty,
as I
jumped
through the
fog
and dropped
a word,
into
the sky.

Each one
that fell
towards
the summit
of
earths breath,
rippled
in damp spasm
undulating
outwards
in concentric
vibrations
of sopping
ringlets
wringing wet
with
swell and
savory,
titilating
in parlance
as they
breached
the jetty
into the mouth,
of your
narrows.

There you were
standing,
in the doorway
of exodus
with the odor
of
gasp,
on your breath
trickling down
onto
the carnal
sculpture
of
your
teeming bust
as I
swallowed
a pill
of air
with a glass,
of your
river,
your marble
eyes
rolling back
as you
arched,
licking the
canopy
of the
headlands
squeezing
my mustache
between your
stems
your fingers
in my
hair
pulling,
shortening
the spread,
of the
outskirts
of your
duress.

Come
with me
as we
plant our
souls
together
and
watch them
drip
in
intertwine,
as they
grow as
one
toward
the ceiing,
of time.

This,
silent poem
of ours
is
creamy,
at
its base
with verses
of violet
and
temporary
tatoos
of
panting
handprints,
made
with
the slapping
psalms
of
couplet and
cadence,
and
drooling
bitemarks
scratched,
into backs
of
chiseled
meter,
and hymn.

I’ve grown
tired
of waiting.

You,
will be
mine.

Through every
no
uttered,
there
is
a million
grunts
and screams
of,
YES.

You’ve
already had,
me
in your
nightly
secrets,
with your
back
to
your
lover,
or naked
and
damp
underneath
multi faceted
shower
heads,
cleansing
over and
over,
and over,
this
scene
of your
forgiven
sins.

Have me,
Now,
deep
and
plunging
into the
shallow
of your
sodden
denial,
that
never
discovered
spot
in the
back
of you,
is for
me,
and me,
only.

All
I ever
wanted,
was someone
to share,
the right
regrets
with.

It’s taken
me
half
of my life
to even
understand,
what, it
is.

Come
with me,
on this day,
to help me
not
understand,
the last half.

As the sun
tears through
another
virgin
sky,
as a plant
looks
up,
from his
morning drink.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-03-18 10:14 PM

Fannin' myself here, boy I am so ready to bask beneath the summer sun and drink the blue sky in.

What a steamy racy rise you got outta me.

Oh boy, this is one succulent and ever so seductive poem.

blowin' my bangs off my forehead. phew!

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

2 posted 2011-03-18 10:28 PM

Haha... Make that two blue sky's and I'll join you Bluesy...

You are too funny lol

Thanks for the sweet review.

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

3 posted 2011-03-19 02:29 AM

..nice one, Richy; a treat to read..spiros

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-03-19 07:48 AM

Seduction at its best, dear Richy! I get this vision of surfing the highest waves of passion ...

Quite impressive really!

Love and smiles.
Margherita

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

5 posted 2011-03-19 01:23 PM

"All
I ever
wanted,
was someone
to share,
the right
regrets
with."

Of course!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2011-03-19 01:48 PM

Richy...falling into the cadence of this waterfall...what a rush!!

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

7 posted 2011-03-19 03:45 PM

There is always a whirl in your world of writing. It truly moves me along the page
start to finish. Much enjoyed !

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2011-03-19 09:14 PM

Richard, I have a confession to make! I read all of your poems so fast (on the first read through!!!) that my whizzing eyes make me dizzy! On the second and third and fourth reads, I read them slowly ~ absorbing and visualizing every scintillating line!

Linda

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

9 posted 2011-03-19 10:21 PM

Spiros - Thank you for stopping by kind sir, I appreciate your valuable time.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

10 posted 2011-03-19 10:23 PM

I've got a board for two Margy, get behind me and hold on, and I'll show you some waves that you've never even dreamed about.

Love ya

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

11 posted 2011-03-19 10:25 PM

Charly my fine sir, I consider it a sincere honor anytime you make your presence on one of my scribbles... thank you dear man for your kind thoughts.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

12 posted 2011-03-19 10:27 PM

Dear Martie, you know I'm right there at the bottom waiting to catch you... just so you know... I might not let go for awhile...

(((Hugs you)))

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

13 posted 2011-03-19 10:28 PM

Thank you EmmaRose, that means alot to me coming from you!

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

14 posted 2011-03-19 10:31 PM

I'll tell you Linda, I write these silly things so fast that I don't even recognize them when I happen to bump into them later down the road...

Thank you honeybee, you are such a sweetheart!!

Richard

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