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twistedpup
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since 2011-02-25
Posts 115


0 posted 2011-03-17 09:52 AM



Im done crying over love
Im done trying for something that never was.
Im getting off this train
The ride was fun, now im done.
I dont like games they're no fun.
Its time for me to stand tall all alone.
Dont need no one.

Im done crying over love.
Im done trying for something that never was.
Im getting off this train.
The ride was fun, now im done.

Thought you were him
diffrent then the others,
guess i was wrong.
The fight is over,
time for me to be number one again.

Im done crying over love.
Im done trying for something that never was.
Im getting off this train,
the ride was fun, now im done.

You can do what you want.
I will too.
Im done waiting for that text,
causing me to stress.
Im not going to worry over you.

*hugs*

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dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
Posts 442

1 posted 2011-03-19 03:16 PM


Very wise words , Stand tall !
porky118
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since 2011-03-31
Posts 15
minnesota
2 posted 2011-03-31 12:57 PM


good choice of words. Im going to wanna hear you sing this now...lol
steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

3 posted 2011-03-31 09:27 PM


makes me want to get out the vinyl "Rednecks, White Socks, and Blue Ribbon Beer"
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2011-04-01 04:04 AM


Good song title.
Hope you get it down just right in song.

I love writing song lyrics. Some short some long story songs like the 'Back To Monogamy' song I have posted on this page here.
It's quite a fun craft and if you ever want me to critique your lyrics I'll try and help. Doesn't mean I'll be right but sometimes it helps.

Take care

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

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