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ken206573
Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487


0 posted 2011-03-16 07:05 PM


I felt so at
eased. The breeze
was cool, the sun
dotted me with
rays of honey. This
day was so relaxing
I didn't even mind
the trash that
was below my
feet. I saw smiles
and hello's
from each direction,
birds chasing
each other
as trees danced
with joy
without their
white heavy
winter coats.
I being filled
with delight
picked a violet
flower and place
it in my hair,
which my brother
said, "Sis you look
lovely".
Which
kind of made my
day feel even
brighter.

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katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2011-03-16 07:27 PM


Just beautiful! I could see spring blooming!
Kat >^..^<

Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2011-03-16 07:53 PM


Ah, flowers in the hair...
a show of spring, indeed!


JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2011-03-16 09:52 PM


Nice brother, most brothers have a tendency to . . . er . . . not be so complimentary to their sis's.

~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~

ken206573
Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487

4 posted 2011-03-17 06:14 PM


Katahdin-Thank you, it sure is blooming around here.
Sunshine- It's been a while since I put one in there, it's truly nice.
JerryPat2- He's the nicest big brother I have...unless he get's angry. thabnks for reading.
-Nina

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