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Word Weaver
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0 posted 2011-03-16 05:57 PM



Awaken Spring

throughout the land
anticipation is rampant
we long for the vernal equinox
that magic first day of winter's end when
the hours of day equal the hours of night
but I fear this year spring's gown
will be frosted with white crystals
for winter is stubborn and lingers
the nights still bitter cold
the days with a nip in the air
tulips carefully planted refuse to surface
the daffodils lack vigor
trees remain barren of blooms
except for the flowering plum tree
covered in pink and defiant as if to say...
follow my lead, come forth, do not fear
the sky will once again be blue
the birds will look for leafy green branches
hummingbirds and butterflies will seek nectar
let us burst forth in joyous anticipation
soon my blossoms will be no more
spring is such a short season
revel in it while we can
this is our time to lead the parade
winds of March blow off spring's gown
dissolve the icy crystals
dress her in glorious colors
scent the air with flower's perfume
to entice the birds to sing
let April showers cleanse the land
lift the spirits of all the people
bring the children back outside to play
allow them to roll on green grasses
pick flowers for mommie's bouquets
daises spring forth for fair maidens
to recite, he loves me, he loves me not
defy winter, and shine spring, shine.


© Copyright 2011 Marcia Miller-Twiford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2011-03-16 09:10 PM


quote:
bring the children back outside to play
allow them to roll on green grasses
pick flowers for mommie's bouquets


Ahhh...dandelions!

Nice to "see" you, Marcia! That's a great photo!


JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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2 posted 2011-03-16 09:50 PM


All the flowers that refuse to spring forth before spring gives them the word are hunkered down. They will come, and with a vengeance will they come. The countryside will sing their colorful and fragrant glory.

~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2011-03-26 01:26 PM


Thank you for bringing spring into glorious
bloom.
                               Ida

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2011-03-26 01:47 PM


Marcia, in South Africa, especially in Durban, where I live, there is not a great deal of difference in the seasons, but your poem makes the northern hemisphere USA change of seasons very real to me.  I hung on every word of this.  Beautiful poem!

Owl

Misty Lilacs
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5 posted 2011-03-26 01:51 PM


I can't wait. I live in northern New England and it's been a long, long winter. My hubby is still skiing while I wit impatiently for the snow to melt and the flowers to come through the earth.

Wonderful poem.

ooxx  Marti

I do the MS Walk everyday!!

Misty Lilacs
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White Birch Forest
6 posted 2011-03-26 01:52 PM


I can't wait. I live in northern New England and it's been a long, long winter. My hubby is still skiing while I sit impatiently for the snow to melt and the green to come through the earth.

Wonderful poem.

ooxx  Marti

I do the MS Walk everyday!!

steavenr
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7 posted 2011-03-26 09:36 PM


there is such an anthem-like quality to this one...come down south where we have had flowers to bloom and radiate in their glory, having passed on to that flower heaven in the sky...so enjoyed the write...nicely done
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