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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-03-16 12:58 PM



Impatient warming
Coaxing tender greens from sleep
Awakening spring
LGRĀ©3/16/11

© Copyright 2011 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-03-16 01:45 PM


chiggers and fire ants
skeeters and blood-sucking ticks
sunburn third degree

~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-03-16 02:00 PM


On the patio
Ice cold fresh squeezed lemonade
T-bones on the grill  

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2011-03-16 02:21 PM


down in the basement
a gallon of ice cold beer
door seal insect proof

~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2011-03-16 02:39 PM


On the screened in porch
safe from flying nuisances
laying in hammock

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2011-03-16 02:45 PM


hurricane force winds
destroys new screened in porch
whot happened, Lori?

~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2011-03-16 02:53 PM


Blown to smithereens
I go arse over elbows
Over the rainbow

JerryPat2
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7 posted 2011-03-16 03:51 PM


Ha ha ha ha ha
Damned if you do or don't
I guess we should quit

~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2011-03-16 07:50 PM


Chokas are wonderful...but normally
you let some others butt in...

Rains glisten tulips
birds come to nest eagerly
don't blink; bless'd spring time!


faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA
9 posted 2011-03-16 11:00 PM


good one, Lori..enjoyed it a lot!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
10 posted 2011-03-17 09:51 AM


Faith, you should have chimed in with one of your own! thanks!
Lori

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