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katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

0 posted 2011-03-14 08:48 PM


Me,
Me becomes we,
We cut to the chase,
Chase a dream,
Dream of love
Love eternal,
Eternally yours,
Yours is mine,
Mine forever,
Forever together,
Together in heart,
Hearts of flowers,
Flowers a garden,
Garden to sow,
So grow old,
Old but not alone,
Alone in a crowd,
Crowd my thoughts,
Thoughts of you,
You and me,
Me.

[This message has been edited by katahdin (03-14-2011 09:28 PM).]

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2011-03-14 08:50 PM


Yeaaaaa! From Me to . . . er . . . Me.  A lot of living and emotion played out before Me got around to Me again. Haha! Gotta love it.

~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~

katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
2 posted 2011-03-14 09:30 PM


Thanks JP from.....ME
LOL, Kat >^..^<

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2011-03-14 09:47 PM


A delightful circle of loving and living!
Leaves me with a smile on my face ~ and in my heart!

Happy hug,
EA

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2011-03-14 10:08 PM


Love the sentiment and the style is unique, and reads like a dream.

Good, good!!!

katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
5 posted 2011-03-14 10:57 PM


Thanks EA and Blues for the look and nice comments.
Kat >^..^<

Honeybunch
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6 posted 2011-03-15 12:43 PM


Yes, like it, Kat!  

Helen

Daddy Goose38
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obama's a rice paper tiger
7 posted 2011-03-15 04:50 PM


Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, Kaaaaaarrrrrrennnnnn!
ken206573
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8 posted 2011-03-15 05:39 PM


I enjoyed this very much.
easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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9 posted 2011-03-15 06:58 PM


Poignant, especially as regards widows and widowers... your short, word-linked lines describe the delicate thought process of time-dulled mourning.
Richy
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10 posted 2011-03-15 06:58 PM



Love, love, love it!!

Adorable!

latearrival
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11 posted 2011-03-15 07:27 PM


A life time within these few words.Well done. latearrival
katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
12 posted 2011-03-15 09:08 PM


Thanks everyone, I really appreciate you stopping by to read and comment. Thanks again!
Kat =^..^=

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