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Open Poetry #47

Gift of Love

Word Weaver
Member

since 2011-03-06

Posts 437
California, USA

0 posted 2011-03-14 05:54 PM

Fashioned as a transcendental bridge
serene, unpretentious suspension
of gracefully conceived symbols
the fragile interlocking uniqueness
of exquisitely engineered words
this is the loving gift of the poet.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-03-14 05:59 PM

wow...you sure said a lot in very few words...i love brevity...my favorute part of your poem is the ending...great job!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-03-14 06:19 PM

Ah, yes, that is what most of us strive for, Word Weaver. We'd love to fashion the words thusly and give to the world exquisite jewels in the structure of the form.

~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

3 posted 2011-03-14 07:37 PM

Nice! I also love your ending.
Kat >^..^<

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