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katahdin
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since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

0 posted 2011-03-13 04:47 AM

WHAT IS A DREAM

What is a dream...
But an unsung song
May you always be singing
Can I sing along

To share a dream
We'll sing together
Our hearts in tune
Melody of love forever

What a beautiful dream
Your dream is my song
Two hearts in harmony
Singing, dreaming, together we belong

I dreamt a dream of only you
And I woke up singing

~*~ To live is to love, to love is to live ~*~

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2011-03-13 05:29 AM

true words are the best, thanks for the lovely ans solacing share.

yann

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

2 posted 2011-03-13 06:49 AM

Yann- thanks for the look!
Kat >^..^<

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-03-13 08:11 AM

Beautiful premise for a poem, Kat. One that I wouldn't have came up with in like forever. Just shows me where your heart is.

~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2011-03-13 01:48 PM

Now I feel like singing! Tra la la ~ la la!

May your dreams always be sweet and be a reflection of your reality!

EA

Word Weaver
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since 2011-03-06

Posts 437
California, USA

5 posted 2011-03-13 02:03 PM

Absolutely beautiful. Write on new poet!

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

6 posted 2011-03-13 02:45 PM

Maybe the dream was actually real and that's why you woke up signing. Enjoyed!

Helen

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

7 posted 2011-03-13 07:19 PM

Thanks everyone for checking out my poem and the nice comments. Keep dreaming and singing!
Kat >^..^<

Daddy Goose38
Member

since 2010-09-04

Posts 430
obama's a rice paper tiger

8 posted 2011-08-16 06:26 PM

Ohhhh, Karen Dear, that is so gentle and so sweet.
Jaime

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

9 posted 2011-08-16 06:29 PM

Enjoyed your poem katahdin,
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2011-08-16 06:31 PM

I really like this. The poem says much, and is catchy, like a song, as you read it.

~ I knew drugs weren't the answer. I just had to find out for myself. ~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2011-08-16 06:35 PM

You sing this dream beautifully, dear Karen!

Love,
Margherita

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

12 posted 2011-08-18 01:02 PM

Nice write, my friend - perfect last two lines.

j.

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

13 posted 2011-08-18 01:44 PM

What a wonderful way to wake up, Kat! Much enjoyed.

Owl

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2011-08-19 02:43 PM

I liked this very much... especially the last 2 lines!

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

15 posted 2011-08-27 10:43 PM

So very nice. I love tune and the lyrics.

A

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

16 posted 2011-08-28 03:56 AM

So cute....I dream alot, mostly vivid dreams that are confusing, maybe your poem will bring me happy dreams...take care!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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