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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
Posts 70
California

0 posted 2011-03-13 01:57 AM


Seeing you betray everything you said
Let my heart lose its blood
Seeing you kiss him that way
How did you do this to me?
When i am losing my mind
I lose my sense of control
You never did treat me right
Now i have lost my sight
I am on my way
You better get out of here
I'm a bomb waiting for the ticker to reach its time

When were you here?
My heart has lost all the memories
My mind keeps blocking you from here
Nothing but a letter with blood dripping from the page
Writing a script from life
"My beloved where were we headed?
Was there anything or was i too late?"



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katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2011-03-13 03:35 AM


I feel your pain.
Kat >^..^<

To live is to love
To love is to live

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